This one was written for the six sentence story prompt of range, and the idyllic picture that was posted by Sarah for our weekly picture prompt on The Writer’s Mess. I am back from my hiatus for Nanowrimo, and will be posting regularly. Follow a hunter, as they make this season, their season. Note I was personally aiming at Christmas this week, I completely missed. If you are squeamish, read the tags. Bonus points if you get the title reference.

He sat perfectly still in the blind, having waited far too long for this opportunity to let it escape him now.
He could see his target, just out of range, and he took long slow breaths to keep his heart rate down as his excitement grew, knowing that this year he would finally get one.
They had been hunting for years, and he had never hit anything, it was always Rick that brought in a kill, sometimes two if it was a good season.
This was it, it would be his year, and he fought down his own impatience, as a shot too early would cause his quarry to flee, leaving him the laughingstock of the lodge.
She was heading his way, and he waited until she was well within range, making sure that when he pulled the trigger she would go down cleanly, all he had to do was squeeze.
It was over in an instant, with the twitch of a finger, the body dropping like a marionette with it’s strings cut, laying there with her ski’s askew, blood splattered on the snow, and he felt giddy with adrenaline, as he had done it; he had finally made his first kill.
Nice phrase: “the body dropping like a marionette”. Also what is awaiting him is an awareness of the tragedy when he finds her and “her ski’s askew”.
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“I’m hunting wabbits,” he used to say. Of course, he never actually harmed anything.
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Oh no he didn’t! (Yes he did). I’ll have to be more careful
When I ski! 😳
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… horrifying. the use of “marionette” made me pause … and for good reason.
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Testing. I left a response earlier but it didn’t show here.
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I’ll try again… They are from two different worlds – and it looks like she is about to upset his… she is a bit shady.
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Well,well,well. That was a surprise I expected a deer and you trumped it with a female skier.
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Sinister lodge, I must say. You had me going till the very last reveal, expecting a tragic mistake, served instead with murder. Which raises the question: If an animal were deliberately killed not for meat or conservation purposes but for sport, how different is it from a murder?
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