Once again I have taken a word like TREE and used it to write a dark, twisted, little tragedy. I don’t even know how to explain this one really without giving it away. I will say that its dark, and a lot of things are implied, but nothing stated outright. Really just a single bad choice, and then some very improbable consequences…
The world spun, or was it is her that was spinning, round and round, faster and faster, and it felt like any moment she would fall, losing balance, land face first in the dew-covered grass.
When the moment finally came and her mostly numb feet left the ground, she fell forward, but the feeling on her face was stinging and warm and she wasn’t falling she was floating.
She turned up lazily and saw her reflection gazing back down at her from the mirrored ceiling, pupils blown, hair floating freely and she smiled at the serenity she saw there even as a part of her mind tried desperately to work where the mirror had come from.
All at once the serenity was gone, as she took a deep breath, choking, feeling like her lungs were on fire, knowing at once that she was having an asthma attack, and she desperately tried to propel herself back down to the ground, towards the bag with her medication.
Her limbs felt like jelly, as she struggled through air thick as molasses, floating upward as she fought for life trying to make her way back down, and then she stopped fighting, knowing she wouldn’t make it, wanting to enjoy her last moments in this warm feeling of carefree weightlessness.
It would be hours before her fate was observed by anyone other that the fake palm overlooking the heated pool, and weeks before anyone but that tree would learn that there was no foul play, just a trip gone wrong, a little girl lost to the easily avoidable, a tragedy.
A tragic tale but a splendid Six, Anne!
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Good story. I like how you set the tragedy up by saying she could not reach her medication with the explanation at the end.
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Thanks. I like to give a little warning for these.
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That was a scary ride. Brilliant pacing and words… scary, but kind of blissful too, even though it ended as a tragedy.
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Thanks, that was what I was going for. Something that was bad, but she didn’t really experience it that way…
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Nicely written Anne. Descriptive, tense – the reader catches on quickly the MC is in over her head. A trip gone very, very bad.
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Very vivid description of an improbable situation, but also totally believable. Trippy Six, well done!
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Thank you, I had fun with it.
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