If you haven’t listened to The Amazing Devil, I highly recommend them, their song “Elsa’s Song” was the inspiration for this one, along with Girlontheedge’s six-sentence-prompt BOOK. This is what I would say is a Dystopian piece about something doing something against the rules, for all the right reasons.
Elsa could hear nothing over rushing sound of her own blood pounding in her ears, as she walked along the mostly empty street, her head down, not making eye contact with those she saw, knowing any one of them could be secret police.
She needn’t be worried, not really, there was no reason to suspect her, buying a new jacket wasn’t a crime, and she was assured that the shape of the garment would conceal the secret it carried, the one that she was risking her life for.
The walk took only minutes, but it felt like hours, every glance towards her an accusation, every nearby step made by the Krali, come to arrest her for what she had done, was doing, was planning yet to do.
Finally, she had made it, she was home, and better yet, she still had it, here, safe. She carefully removed the stiches from the jacket lining, and pulled the thin, worn, book from between the layers, gently, as it was, by far, the most previous thing she had ever owned.
Her eyes filled with tears, as she opened it to the first page, and saw not only the handwriting of her lover, whom she had not seen in so many months, but the small blue flowers dried between the pages, forget-me-nots.
Ooooh, I love forget-me-nots…great story.
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Your SSS really pulls me in, Anne. I want to know more!
Listening to the song now…
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Love to hear that! Thinking of returning to that setting for this weeks.
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Excellent idea 🙂
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Beautifully suspenseful!
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I am glad she escaped those secret police.
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You paint a frightening picture of a possible future.
Room for more, Anne. *hint, hint*:D
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I was thinking of going back to it for this weeks challenge. I have a few ideas. Glad you liked it.
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Bravo. Beautiful and tender sentiments in such dreadful settings – as a dystopia it had a vibe of 1984 about it. The Forget-Me-Nots was such a nice touch.
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